Score: 10

"AWWW"

submission: Metal Gear Funnies

date: July 7, 2008

PARODYS SHOULDN'T BE ENJOYABLE. DID YOU NOT FOLLOW THE EXAMPLE OF THE REST OF NEWGROUNDS?
For fuck sake, no wonder these people are voting low. Where was the unfunny jokes?, and why was the artwork actually good?.
You ridulous people.

Score: 7

"Wasn't half bad"

submission: The Clay Assassin

date: May 21, 2008

Overall this was good, quite enjoyable.

The story was simple, but funny and well put together.
The movements were pretty good, when I saw the clay people. I was kind of expecting the wobble side to side, kind of walking which I dislike. I apologise for that judgement and I take it back.
The voice acting was done well and was very clear, though I am not a fan of the strange squeaky voice.

Things to work on:
Too much camera movement, was very shakey and dodgey at times.
Some of the movements were very sudden and could use some more frames in-between. (Is always better too add too many frames than not enough)
Perhaps some lip sync.
Better camera quality.
Maybe some better lighting.

(Oh and if you give me the "Knox doesn't do this and that" excuse, it's not valid as I am not a very big fan of him anyways)

So overall good job, keep it up and good luck in future animations.

Score: 8

"I enjoyed it."

submission: Rainbow Roller OLD

date: May 15, 2008

It was well put together and pretty addicting.
I did have fun with it.
Was a very cute game.
But there was some things that bugged me a lot. Such as even if the ball is rolling back, even a slightly. No matter where you click on him, he goes flying the direction he's rolling.
So I click on the back of the ball when he is rolling back slightly, and he goes flying straight to the beginning again.
And another thing is that I was having far too much trouble on the easy levels, I don't even want to imagine what the hardest levels must be like.

Like I said I did enjoy myself, it was a fun game. Just a few things annoyed me.
Good job.